Monday, July 2, 2007

a beautiful thing called life..!

Place : Office Time : 7:52 PM Mood : after I could rhyme this, I feel good.!

the distant light in a villiage that catches your eye
suggestive smile of a girl that makes you cry
the song playin somewhere which is goin on your mind
a soulful drizzle at the most unexpected time

sleepin at night after workin your heart out
a day full of agonies, and then when you shout
an hour at the temple with something divine
and then when u smile and your eyes shine

the world full of people to love and die for
watchin the waves at the sea shore
a problem solved which has been a nighmare
a girl dreaming and you caught her unaware

watchin the sun set and wait till it comes again
laughin with your friends as if you've gone insane
being with the person who makes you complete
if u call it all a suffering, so be it..!

P.S. The poem is just a reflection of ideas on the poets mind(feels good to call myself one..!)
They are bound to be incoherent and yet coherent in some way.
and then its just a try.. be good to me ..!! :)


ateet said...

definitely not publishable stuff ...
...but its honest and very beautiful ....and thats what matters, I guess !

Nivz said...

it connects quite well to our being...!!